Review of Sarah Gorham’s Bad Daughter

Sarah Gorham. Bad Daughter. New York: Four Way Books, 2011. Paper, 80 pp., $15.95.

Reading Sarah Gorham’s poetry brings to mind perhaps the most memorable and oft-quoted lines from Philip Larkin: “They fuck you up, your mum and dad, / They may not mean to but they do.” That analogy, of course, is a humorous oversimplification. Gorham’s work deals with family dynamics and the fact of human imperfection without Larkin’s ironic snideness, but with the wisdom, mature playfulness, and genuine pathos of Larkin’s most compelling work. In her previous collection The Cure (Four Way Books, 2003), Sarah Gorham told us the story of a family bowing under the weight of the father’s alcoholism. Her new offering, Bad Daughter, explores the complex and often fraught relationship between mothers and daughters. In “Homesickness,” the speaker tells us, “Genes are a kind of blue letter from a mother / to her daughter: Good news, bad news.” These are indeed poems of “bad news” and “good news”—of pain and joy—and, as in the best work of many poets, the two work together to form the powerful emotional landscape of this collection.

In Bad Daughter, that landscape is never an easy one—never black and white. There is an exhilarating darkness in poems like “Immortality,” in which the speaker says of a baby, “Remember when the names for little things weren’t sickening? // Touch that fantastic little foot. The baby is an implant, a fresh cutting. / She will take. She will take you away.” The play of violence and wonder in these skillful lines makes plain the irony in them without veering into sarcasm. Even darker is the poem “Barbecue,” which employs a less subtle violence in one of the collection’s most evocative metaphors. Here, the speaker compares four sisters to the four tines of a fork:

    […] Sisters—they were that close,
  jockeying for love in a cage
  with silver bars. The origin of the fork

  was a spear in an animal’s heart.
  You’ve heard of knife scars
  on a plate? Blame it on the knife,

  though the fork held the weakling down.

The metaphor is complicated. The knife here is not the parents, as one might expect, for the speaker will “mind / her parents’ appeal for peace” and “place her knife back on the table.” There is no easy, moralistic reading for poems such as this, and that is the power of Gorham’s work; she investigates the difficult, often unsettling nature of family dynamics without self-pity and without pointing fingers. Bad Daughter reminds us that family is not static but, rather, an ever-evolving relationship: “To my child I become my mother,” Gorham says (in “Accommodation”), “and her mother, and hers.”

The joys of Bad Daughter are not to be found only in these questions of family. Gorham, with the skill and confidence of a master artisan, crafts poems in an array of styles and forms that never impose themselves on the work, but seem always necessary: from prose poems like “After Pindar” and “Bob White” to rhyming, shortened-lined sonnets like “Compost” and “Pond in Winter” to the free verse of “Our House” and “The Sacrifice,” whose lines move elegantly around the middle of the page. Each poem, whether directly addressing the complexities of daughterhood announced in the title or not, plays an integral part in constructing Bad Daughter, a collection that is gracefully made, challenging, moving, and unquestionably whole.

Review of David Rigsbee’s The Red Tower: New and Selected Poems

David Rigsbee. The Red Tower: New and Selected Poems. NewSouth Books, 2010. $24.95

David Rigsbee has the kind of enviable journal and magazine credits that might suggest a high national profile. The acknowledgments page of The Red Tower: New and Selected Poems lists such prestigious and widely distributed venues as The American Poetry Review, The New Yorker, and Poetry, as well as such highly respected university-sponsored publications as The Southern Review, The Georgia Review, and The Journal. However, his many books have generally been published by small presses, which, given their limited resources for advertising and distribution, tend to find readers fit but few. He may be more widely known for his co-editorship of Invited Guest, a valuable University of Virginia Press anthology of twentieth-century Southern poetry, than for his own poems.

The Red Tower is Rigsbee’s first publication with NewSouth Books, which, though another small press, seems more interested in publicizing its releases than do many others. The Red Tower thus seems likely to bring Rigsbee something more like the recognition he deserves. The book offers a substantial overview of his work: sixty-five previously collected poems and excerpts from two long sequences join sixteen new poems, providing a substantial overview of his forty-year career.

The new poems come first; taken together, the opening three make a good introduction to the whole collection. “Harp” cinematically invites us into “a room / not mine”—a room in which the poet is “sitting by a wooden harp”—and shares the room’s view of a woman across the street hanging wash on her balcony. As the poet watches, he is “thinking of hot, loser towns / where I am no longer, of years imagined / when I never was,” then fastens our attention on a particular item in that load of laundry:

One child’s dress, an ever-
serviceable blue cotton smock, says it all,
hanging four-square from the balcony rail,
as if in the absence of its little owner, billowing,
it took that absence on a journey.
Pointless speculation, says a contrapuntal voice,
and yet that is what I did with my life.

So the poem concludes. “Harp,” like much of The Red Tower, offers an attractive combination of precision and mystery: the language is deft, economical, and evocative, but the relationship between image and idea can be elusive. (The dress says what all, exactly?) But Rigsbee connects far more dots than he doesn’t. He’s no John Ashbery, relentlessly pulling the rug out from under our feet; he’s an occasionally elliptical artist whose ellipses seem designed to draw in rather than shut out his readers. In those final two lines, “Harp” also articulates a modesty that pervades this book. Though Rigsbee often inserts himself into his poems, he hardly writes in the self-aggrandizing vein of much recent American poetry. Indeed, the image of him sitting next to a harp (a laughable exaggeration of the traditional lyre), and moreover a harp that stands silent, suggests nothing so much as the poet’s sense of his own uselessness, a sense only reinforced by the poem’s ending. It’s a poignant but also appealingly self-critical sentiment with which to open a retrospective.

Next comes the shorter and more startling “After Reading.” Reading someone’s work (but whose, he doesn’t say), Rigsbee thinks “how purity is a curse, how it / puts us off the human,” distracting us from the real world we live in—or, as he puts it, from “the garbage and the grief.” This leads him to recall standing in St. Peter’s, gazing at the Pietà, and having a surprising thought about the 1972 attack on that masterpiece: he found himself “secretly admiring / the madman whose hammer / chipped the same marble that made / Michelangelo such a monster.” Several poems in The Red Tower demonstrate a value of “impurity” over “purity,” some by indulging in the grotesque (“Spaghetti,” “Hosanna,” “The Exploding Man”), some by engaging in the kind of ellipsis discussed above (“A Life Preserver,” “Autobiography,” “Almost You”), and some by partly adopting and partly resisting the strictures of traditional verse form (“Sonnet,” Cloud Journal, Sonnets to Hamlet).

The third new poem, “The Red Tower,” sounds a recurring theme: the poet’s anguish over his younger brother’s death, which we eventually learn was a suicide. Rigsbee writes, “Yeats was wrong when he wrote / that God talked to those long dead”; he offers “a blinking tower / on a mountain” as an image of such communication, noting that its pulsing red light “raised no one.” He closes with a rhetorical question, repeated as if in despair: “Because even if / God talked to the dead, what could / He possibly say to them? / What could He possibly say?” Several of the poems dealing with his brother’s life and death are very strong (“In Ohio,” “The Mermaid,” “Safe Box,” “Linking Light”), but one is particularly remarkable: “Four Last Songs,” a virtuosic four-part, eighteen-page poem based on Richard Strauss’s Vier Letzte Lieder. Strauss’s songs, settings of poems by Hermann Hesse and Joseph von Eichendorff, encourage an acceptance of death; Rigsbee integrates them, passage by passage, into this long meditation on his brother’s last act, setting off the borrowings by printing them in all caps. The result is a powerful counterpoint between turmoil and peace that Rigsbee finally resolves: “let us not lose our way / but move along the wall of silence // and cling, as he has done, to the wall of silence.”

The Red Tower is a very rich book, one difficult to do justice in a short review, but at least two more aspects need to be noted, if only briefly. First is the frequency with which Rigsbee honors other artists and thinkers. In addition to all the masters already mentioned above, these poems memorialize or otherwise invoke Richard Rorty, Allen Tate, Gil Scott-Heron, Edmund Wilson, George Orwell, Wolfgang Mozart, Randall Jarrell, and Joseph Brodsky. Second is the inclusion here of several lovely poems restoring us to a relationship with nonhuman nature, poems such as “The Mountaintop,” “Crickets,” “Heat,” “Wild Strawberries,” and “Vespers.” “Vespers” appears below, so Rigsbee’s gifts can speak for themselves in closing:

Wind carries off the slighter
birds, after which a purling of doves
adjusts the evening. An owl stands
quiet as a pine cone when a blade of light
breaches the hilltop and is gone. Behind me,
a compact car carries compact profiles
to town. Only a cloud, like a lipstick kiss
left on a mirror, offers
its supplemental farewell to the unbroken haze.
This is the final atmosphere
of a work day, not great bindings
but the modest affinities: bread
crossing the table,
as the jet engine overcomes the dove.

Review of Caitlin Horrocks’ This Is Not Your City

Caitlin Horrocks. This is Not Your City. Sarabande Books. July, 1 2011. Paperback, 168 pp., $15.95

Make the familiar strange, the strange familiar. One of the primary struggles the fiction writer undertakes is to bring “true surprise” to the page – an element of plot or character or a particular voice that on the one hand is unexpected, and on the other hand is completely honest to the world the author has created. Caitlin Horrocks is clearly a writer who takes this struggle seriously. Every story in her debut collection This Is Not Your City aims to startle. From the bizarre premise of a reincarnated bank worker in Des Moines encountering characters that she remembers from her one hundred twenty-six past lives to the subverted expectations in the story of a young teacher punishing her students in creative and perverse ways, Horrocks throws her readers off balance from story to story, page to page.

Overall, this endeavor pays out with dividends. “This Is Not Your City,” the eponymous tale in the collection, stakes out dramatic ground in what is to the majority of readers––and, one might assume, to Horrocks as well––unfamiliar territory: a Russian mail-order bride living in Finland discovers that her fifteen-year old daughter has gone missing after a camping trip with her boyfriend. The first two-thirds of the story offers very little in the way of dramatic action; the main character, Daria, occupies herself with desultory cooking and cleaning while we learn through exposition the events that have led up to the present. And yet the slow pacing does no harm here. On the contrary, it allows us to plumb the depths of Daria’s loneliness in a “marriage [that] is a gaping hush, an unraveling hole that cannot be darned” (139) and to stare mutely at the walls separating her from her daughter, her husband, and the society outside the home in which she lives as a stranger. Having clearly outlined the contours of her character’s world, Horrocks delivers a plot twist in the last third of the story that is deeply satisfying for feeling both unexpected and inevitable.

Three other stories take place outside the United States, and indeed, these are among the strongest in the collection. Horrocks seems to strike the perfect balance between the outwardly unfamiliar and the emotionally honest when she takes her characters abroad. Daria’s isolation as a Russian bride in Finland harkens back to the book’s third story, “Going to Estonia.” In that tale, a young woman moves from the backcountry of northern Finland to the bright lights of Helsinki where, displaced and lonely, she succumbs to the charms of her rakish downstairs neighbor. Horrocks’ talent for combining simple, direct statements with fresh, evocative description is apparent on the very first page, depicting Ursula’s interaction with her seatmate on the bus ride down to the city:

“…At a highway rest stop outside Kemi, the boy stood outside the men’s
toilets puffing out great gouts of air, trying to step forward into the clouds before they disappeared. He had a strange, flat face, and as Ursula watched him choke with laughter at his own breath she thought there was something wrong with him…Back on the bus, the boy introduced himself.

She told him her name and he wrote it unevenly in the moisture on the window, with the R pointed backward. ‘You’re pretty, Ursula,’ he said.

She looked away; it wasn’t true” (33).

As the title suggests, the story features a trip to Estonia, but it is Ursula’s discomfort in her own skin––as reflected in her estrangement from her new home in the capital––that is at its heart.

The two other stories in the book that take place overseas, “The Lion Gate” and “In the Gulf of Aden, Past the Cape of Guardafui,” feature Americans trying to escape troubles back home. The main character in “The Lion Gate” is burdened by a deep, long-growing desperation that has rendered her numb long before we encounter her; taken out of her normal environment, this numbness ebbs and the pain becomes suddenly focused. The emotional territory explored here may be familiar to many readers––Renee, a single woman approaching middle age, struggles with the fact that her chance to have children is rapidly slipping away––and yet the story is in no way a cliché. Rather, the strength of Horrocks’ prose and the depth of her vision ensures that Renee’s tale affects us as if we have never heard anything like it.

The final tale in the book portrays the deep-seeded desperation of its characters to very different effect. When Somali pirates take the cruise ship on which Wil and Lucy Voorhuis are taking a vacation from caring for their severely disabled son, the event is drained of its terror for Lucy:

“If there was to be at some point a separation of sheep and lambs, wheat and chaff, the passengers who would be spared and those who would be executed, she thought she and Wil should volunteer themselves. They were qualified hostages, years of experience. They wouldn’t protest. They could be shuttled and shuffled and they would do it with, if not love, a numb contentment” (161).

Such a direct statement of metaphor is potentially risky, but Horrocks very wisely places it late in the text, at which point we’ve spent enough time with the characters to believe not only the feeling, but their awareness of the feeling. In this way, the moment in which Horrocks shows her hand becomes an organic epiphany for her main character. The story as a whole, meanwhile, reflects the intention behind every tale in This Is Not Your City: to reach beyond the mundane, to cast the line into those deeper waters of the imagination far out from the shore, and to find there the true thing that makes this strange place so familiar.

Review of The Great Night by Chris Adrian

It is a necessity of Shakespeare’s A Midsummer Night’s Dream that the human characters stumbling through the play’s ethereal events be interchangeable. Their compatibility serves the comedic as well as thematic aims of the drama, calling attention to the flippancy of attraction while also challenging the very notion of true love. Chris Adrian’s newest novel, The Great Night, begins on a comparable note of character similitude, his three human protagonists all heading toward the same party “at nearly the same time” via the same San Francisco park, each of them severely “brokenhearted.” Subsequently, the three mortals find themselves entangled in the same supernatural catastrophe, a calamity rooted in the grief of Queen Titania, a fairy goddess suffering the recent loss of both a mortal boy she’d come to love and her husband Oberon. The immediate consequence of her grief is the freeing of Puck, who in Adrian’s telling is a mischievous spirit ravenous for mayhem.

So begins Chris Adrian’s impressively re-imagined version of Shakespeare’s original comedy, and so begin his attempts to bring these two worlds together, to twist the storylines into a tightly-woven, evocative braid. Yet, as Adrian’s novel is no drama, it does something Shakespeare’s play does not, which is to quickly move toward the particular and specific. Adrian devotes the majority of his three-hundred-plus pages to demonstrating exactly how the human protagonists (Molly, Will, and Henry) are distinct people suffering distinct pains. That character development takes the form of lengthy sections of flashback, all intended to lead the reader up to the current moment of crisis while subtly revealing the ways in which Molly, Will, and Henry are tangentially connected. The individual histories move forward beautifully and effortlessly, coloring characters in a way that drama can’t and only novels can, and at the same time providing a welcomed, weighty counterbalance to the novel’s sometimes comic nature. These characters suffer not only in the fairy world, but in the human world as well, and so the stakes are as emotionally tangible as they are poignant.

If there is a downside to Adrian’s approach it is felt in the dramatic present of the story, the actual Great Night, where those significant pasts remain submerged beneath the drunken stupor of fairy liquor and magic. Molly comes closest in allowing her anguish to influence or affect the events of that strange evening, but on the whole she, Will, and Henry bump into one another without understanding or revelation. They are the pawns of the fairy world and despite the lengths Adrian goes to in depicting their troublesome back stories, their pains prove trivial in the face of the supernatural crisis at hand. Like Shakespeare’s transposable depictions, Adrian’s structure comes at the cost of character authenticity. The playwright’s comedy depends on the exploitation of Lysander and Demetrius, caricatures of human desire, and so they are doomed to blank distinction as Athenian men. Similarly, the present-tense sections of The Great Night, in order to strike a humorous tone, belie and debase the complexity of its human protagonists. Adrian seems to undo his own gorgeous work, the drama-in-progress diminishing the characters he spent so much time giving full form to.

What The Great Night truly seems to be, rather than a re-envisioned Shakespearean play, is a beautiful, ghostly meditation on grief and loss. And this is why Adrian’s finest work is found with Titania, the goddess whose pain is the most gripping amongst the players. What Adrian accomplishes with this demanding, majestic fairy queen is to reaffirm a bit of pride in the power and force of human love. Titania’s own flashbacks (to the hospital when her child was sick, to the moments when she and Oberon fought over the boy, to the boy’s tragic, mortal end) first appeared as a masterfully crafted, stand-alone story, called “A Tiny Feast,” in The New Yorker and highlighted the best of this novel. The scenes in and of themselves are intentionally familiar in their sentimental circumstance, which affords Adrian the opportunity for character nuance and allows him to make a complex, intimate woman out of a distant, removed mythical figure. Titania is, of course, humbled by her loss, but Adrian’s careful attention to the flavor of Titania’s naïve agony renders this recognizable situation new and fascinating. An audience can disregard the fall of the mighty and instead empathize and commune with a bereaved deity.

And that is conceivably Adrian’s ultimate aim: to explore the liminal space between grief and salvation, the shadows between loss and redemption. The world of Buena Vista Park on this night is a mixture of the tangible and the airy. It is a passing landscape that will go with the moon and fade with the hours. It is a place both humans and fairies must venture into and out of, and Adrian is in full control of that reality. Perhaps it is his background as a fellow in pediatric hematology-oncology or perhaps it is his previous experience in writing about hospitals and doomed youth (A Better Angel, The Children’s Hospital), but regardless of how, Chris Adrian understands better than most the notion that all love is precious, and mortal or immortal, one always suffers the cost.

Chris Adrian. The Great Night. New York, NY: Farrar, Straus and Giroux.
Hardcover, 309 pp., $26.00.

Review of Erika Meitner’s Makeshift Instructions for Vigilant Girls

Makeshift Instructions for Vigilant Girls. Erika Meitner. Anhinga Press, 2011, 83 pp. $17.00.

Meitner’s third book provides us with an extraordinary number of encounters – from the creepy school photographer to aliens to high school boys to bride and groom. Although this is her third volume, this manuscript was completed before the manuscript of her second published collection, and there are distinct resonances between this collection and both of her previous ones. The voices of this volume speak more like those of her first collection, Inventory at the All-Night Drugstore, in their sassiness and in the wide variety of the poem settings. But her reflections on place and relationship bear a striking resemblance to top- ics that Meitner came to more fully recognize in her second published collection, Ideal Cities.

This volume is a very chatty book; the voices of this collection are those of girls and women learning to navigate their worlds. To supple- ment their voices, Meitner also borrows from the language of a variety of sources which populate their worlds, such as the language of a US Customs Declaration Form in ‘Quisiera Declarar,’ or the language of prayers in ‘Blow’ and the language of news broadcasts in ‘Electric Girls’ and ‘Instructions for Vigilant Girls’.

The book’s three parts provide an arc of instructions that trace the time from the uncomfortable early edge of puberty to adulthood to an adult period that looks back on the journey. The first part of this book is perhaps the most tentative and halting, echoing the youth of its speakers. With each of the two subsequent sections, the reflections grow deeper, and the wisdom increases alongside the self-assurance of the speakers. In the first section, ‘makeshift instructions for vigilant girls,’ these speakers attempt to navigate puberty, high school, first crushes and sex, and relationships with one another. Meitner manages to capture the sense of uncertainty of her teenage speakers, caught in the sex-ex classroom through language pinpointing the anxiety, woes and hopes of these young speakers. But the voice that tells this also is sometimes a voice looking back on those days. Ruefully, the poet comments,

‘Someone needs to remind them, in the silence
of the beep – the longest hanging moment ever –
that we don’t need to ask forgiveness for exploring fingers,
roving lips and tangled limbs…
… The force that drives all flesh
exhausts, exalts, raises us up, ecstatic.’
––‘Sex Ed’

And with this, we see Meitner’s primary exploration, which is not merely a set of instructions but the makeshift nature of both what would suffice or what is needed. In short, the speakers themselves, in their par- ticular situations, are of importance, because of the way the reader can relate to each. She further creates community through the trope of the speaker speaking across the years to a former self, and among the voices that speak in the poems, creating a virtual community of women. In the second section, ‘the contact notes,’ we see the first fruits of earned wis- doms. The third part, ‘domestic spasm,’ arguably the most formally and thematically daring, in which the speakers see themselves close to or in the present, and reflect upon what the self needs now. In many ways, this collection is a collection of stories; yet the poems of this collection rely on a variety of narratives. Many root themselves in the little vignettes that have made up a life – or lives – that a girl or woman has gone through: the discomfort of the sex-ex classroom. First sex. Crushes. Booty calls. And some more fantastical, such as alien abduction.

This third collection of Meitner’s continues to offer reflections on a number of topics that she has begun elsewhere to discuss, while providing new voices and new reflections into her poetry. It is a wonderful addition to the two volumes she has already brought forth.

Review of Jake Adam York’s Persons Unknown

Jake Adam York. Persons Unknown. Carbondale, IL: Southern Illinois University Press, 2010. Paper, 100 pp., $14.95.

 

Jake Adam York’s third collection of poems, Persons Unknown, is in many ways a continuation of the project he began in Murder Ballads (Elixir Press, 2005) and brought into focus with A Murmuration of Starlings (SIU Press, 2008)—a project that, as Major Jackson puts it, “consecrates and memorializes the souls, blood, and bones of those black men and women slaughtered on the altar of hate and violence during the Civil Rights era.” In fact, in his notes at the end of Persons Unknown, York invites us to insert these newest elegies for the Civil Rights martyrs directly into the body of A Murmuration of Starlings’ narrative. It’s true that poems such as “And Ever” and “The Hands of Persons Unknown” might well be continuations of the previous collection’s “Substantiation” and “The Crowd He Becomes.” However, new to Persons Unknown is York’s unique take on self-portraiture. In the book’s second half we find poems entitled “Self-Portrait as a Moment in 1963,” “Self-Portrait in a Plate-Glass Window,” “Self-Portrait at a Bend in the Road,” and “Self-Portrait in the Town Where I Was Born.” In the third of these, York writes:

 

 […] I catch myself

on the car’s hot windows,
  distorted just enough
to be someone else—a cousin

or a local on the edge of the frame
  ready to disappear
into the smoke or the heat or the trees.

The mountain’s dark behind me.
  My hand’s on the latch,
the last warmth still there.

One of us is leaving.

One of us is already gone.

 

Where we readers might expect to find pure autobiography, we find portraits of a place with the poet somewhere in the background, like Icarus in Bruegel’s famously ekphrasized painting. For York, a self-portrait is a portrait of the South, and not only the people—never merely “a cousin // or a local”—but the very landscape itself. These people, be they martyrs or murderers, nameless townsfolk or the poet himself, are all “distorted just enough / to be someone else,” even each other; and the landscape of York’s South, from the “low storm of pine” where the “hickory tang snares us” to the “inscription of moonlight and clouds” reflecting in a plate-glass window, so fully permeates these people that they are “ready to disappear / into the smoke or the heat or the trees.”

In Persons Unknown’s final poem, “Elegy,” York tells the story of two racial murders in his hometown of Gadsden, Alabama. In telling this story, the poem describes a Gadsden landmark—a statue of the little girl who pointed Confederate General Nathan Bedford Forrest, who would later found the Ku Klux Klan, toward safety as he and his troops retreated from Union forces. The statue’s finger, once pointing across the river, has now been broken off. York writes:

 

We come over the bridge.
  We do not look back.
We think of the girl as we pass,
  and the finger we imagine still pointing the way.

 

Here, York’s “we” speaks (as it often does) for himself, for his readers, and for the South—the places and people whose troubled histories have been much written by what the statue represents. Never forget, he seems to tell us. Don’t look back, but don’t ever forget. After reading poems as muscular, insistently lyric, and devastating in their honesty as Jake Adam York’s latest, his readers will surely heed this call to memory.